My New Song

Hello everyone,

I’m Sandeep Gupta, new fish in the Entertainment/Musical World. I try to write my song, not the first… but yup it is new for you. I hope you like it, please give me your feedback if you really like it.. I’m posting just few lines, complete lyrics of song will be upload depending upon your feedback.(Spelling mistake ko ignore kar dena please) Thank you.
Here we go…

Jane kaise din the vo..
mastiyo ko sham thi…
yaaro ko saath tha ..
apno ka pyar v…
Jane kaise din the vo..
mastiyo ko sham thi…
yaaro ko saath tha ..
apno ka pyar v…
ab yae hum kahi v
na hogye yeh pal
tu mane ya maan yeh pal the hassin..
sab choti choti baatyein
yaad aaegi…
tu mane ya maan
yeh pal the hassin…

waiting for your reply..